A few minutes ago I was taking a shower and I heard a scream from the living room. I got out of the bath and ran out there naked. When I got there I saw a burglar standing over the dead bodies of my mom, my dad, and my little brother. When the burglar saw me he jumped out the window and ran off. I’m so scared, I don’t know what do! What’s wrong with this story?
The guy killed his family and took a shower because he was covered in blood. The burglar was standing over the bodies, saw the guy, and ran out the window screaming.